I want a gentle pat upon my head
and you to say I’m good all of the time.
Review my talents, comment on my strengths,
and say for all these things I have a knack.
These happy words and actions are now gone.
Of late I’m drowned in harsh reality.
Forever I will look upon these times
and wonder how those complements I won.
One thing I have to say: Don’t lie but tell
the Truth. I don’t need all your pretty tales.
Don’t float my ships with falsehoods you designed
to make my confidence and ego swell.
I’m not implying that you should be stark,
but don’t dilute good criticism’s sharks.
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365 Sonnets is completed! While there be no more new posts, feel free to read the sonnets and comment! :)
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Tuesday, March 11, 2008
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- Sonnet LXXX
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Yes, I'm sure a lot of ppl can relate to that. Nice phrasiing, as always.
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