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Sunday, March 23, 2008

Sonnet LXXXIII

The mirror insults me, not for its plain face,
but for the nature of its glassy stare.
Two wholes, alike, not meant to be a pair.
Its difference of sameness a disgrace.

Shall future joy exclude me, entering here?
I will not know; I mask all well, you see.
But still, as faulty allies break their creed,
the truth remains, a taunting little leer.

Alas, I’m superstitious, mutely so.
I’d never break a mirror willingly.
So shamefully the twins stay gleefully,
observant in their grief and undertows.

As over-replication causes waste
so do the many lies, which make distaste.

4 comments:

  1. The first line used to read "The mirror insults me, not for its face" but I corrected the awkward iambic pentameter and now it reads "The mirror insults me, not for its plain face". So before "mirror" was read "ME-roar", but now it's supposed to be read "meer".

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  2. In the tenth line, "mirror" should be read "ME-roar" though. However, maybe "MEE-rer" is more phonetically appropriate. Wow...um, reading all this back...I think I've confused everyone enough!

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  3. There's an Epilogue? Meaning 366 sonnets?

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  4. Yes, technically, to provide an ending and to recognize the fact 2008 is a leap year, but it won't count as a sonnet - it will be called "Epilogue" :)

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A word is dead
When it is said,
Some say.

I say it just
Begins to live
That day.

- Emily Dickinson

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