I sit here, thinking now, of love and life – and you.
I think that love must be a boat of gentle size,
with us its former passengers. Within we’d daily ride,
contained within our pair, unseeing of the blue.
If overturned, we’d find ourselves in seas anew,
like those still plashing in experience’s tide.
We sailed each day to find where satisfaction lies,
but never reached it still intact – we’ve split in two.
I swear there’s always fish within that sea,
and one will be the one for me – or close. We’ll see.
But our first maritime adventure into love
shall be remembered – or at least by sea bound me.
I think I see you now – you’re drifting calm and free
- away – unto the brighter sky, as if a dove -
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Monday, October 20, 2008
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What a beautiful poem about first love, and its loss. Really great.
ReplyDeleteAmazingly thoughtful! I love it :)
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