tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3810172600840678349.post1485331260831131355..comments2023-05-09T05:57:23.370-04:00Comments on 365 Sonnets: Sonnet IIMikehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17307885326841557910noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3810172600840678349.post-48193756793214559422008-05-17T20:59:00.000-04:002008-05-17T20:59:00.000-04:00Hi Hillary :)I'm glad you noticed the fact that th...Hi Hillary :)<BR/><BR/>I'm glad you noticed the fact that the thoughts run rampant in this sonnet. It basically outlines my growing insanity as I follow my own desires, goals, and ambitions. I follow my own goals, but criticise others for their lack of interest in life (My heart grows sick with jealousy. | All joyous, you who love the gracious calm.)<BR/><BR/>Hope that helps...so sorry about the grammar in that line. I missed a comma, so it should be "Within the bliss <I>comma</I> disaster’s revelry."<BR/><BR/>Sorry about the confusion...my first few sonnets are very turblent and very experimental; hope they don't make anyone commit suicide...Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17307885326841557910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3810172600840678349.post-86683580497135125282008-05-15T19:19:00.000-04:002008-05-15T19:19:00.000-04:00Sorry but i have to ask for help in interpreting t...Sorry but i have to ask for help in interpreting this. Your thoughts are either all over the place or connected to some topic which I dont understand. I especially dont get Within the bliss disater's revelry, it doesnt seem to make grammatical sense. Please let me know what this is talking about, I'm confused!Hillaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10923565046096154038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3810172600840678349.post-22269704872690081502008-05-03T15:07:00.000-04:002008-05-03T15:07:00.000-04:00Haha! This is my slight mockery of Shakespeare......Haha! This is my slight mockery of Shakespeare...<BR/><BR/>And not many people get my deeper sonnets. Sad but true. Tear!Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17307885326841557910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3810172600840678349.post-83914287588754163082008-05-03T15:02:00.000-04:002008-05-03T15:02:00.000-04:00wow, very...old English? I love "For envy here, I ...wow, very...old English? I love "For envy here, I hold for reason not".<BR/><BR/>But... I don't get it. sryAlicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08590688451737819325noreply@blogger.com